Some people think that staying in hotels is not a good option to know about a country or its people.
What do you think about this viewpoint?
Nowadays people prefer to travel during on vacation. They usually staying in hotels caused from feature of season and but some people prefer to sleep in flat on the nature. But some people believe that stay in hotels is not good idea to search about a country or native human.
Recently the branch of travel has been rapidly developing, and this branch’s stuffs doing research of many type about how to advertise their country. Some of their works which are more expensive inns and cheaper motel, and also they organize to work so many due to grew up to interest of tourists. Visitors like it, too.
If I have been to Russia, I would choose the hotel. Because I think that Russia is danger country and I heart that there are many group of gangster. Therefore, I would afraid from them. Some people think same with me.
My country receives many guests every year. Unfortunately, because of pandemic that sector of tourist is stopping. But if I go to countryside of Mongolia, I would prefer to stay in the flat. My country which has a very convenient and safer than another country. The tourists came in Mongolia need to stay in the beautiful nature and Mongolian people who are friendly, kindness and trustworthy. Also, need to eat Mongolian traditional foods. Such as marmot meat. Marmot meat which is so delicious and cannot eat this food in many countries.
Eventually, I think that people should choose themselves, cause from country’s feature.
- Some people think that staying in hotels is not a good option to know about a country or its people What do you think about this viewpoint 56
- Some people think that staying in hotels is not a good option to know about a country or its people What do you think about this viewpoint 56
- Some people think that staying in hotels is not a good option to know about a country or its people What do you think about this viewpoint 56
- Some people think that staying in hotels is not a good option to know about a country or its people What do you think about this viewpoint 56
- Some people think that staying in hotels is not a good option to know about a country or its people What do you think about this viewpoint 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 278, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...search about a country or native human. Recently the branch of travel has been r...
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Line 2, column 103, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun type seems to be countable; consider using: 'many types'.
Suggestion: many types
... this branch’s stuffs doing research of many type about how to advertise their country. S...
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Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'groups'?
Suggestion: groups
...country and I heart that there are many group of gangster. Therefore, I would afraid ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.832 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51490278142 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5814668851 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.5789473684 106.682146367 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.1578947368 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42105263158 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32882272189 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860705017366 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947419856851 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177625646909 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853928112547 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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