Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your opinion?
One of the most thought about question nowadays is “How can you measure a person’s intelligence?” most of us would have different views to this question. In my opinion, I think the best way to measure intelligence is to recognize the praise that someone gets from the people around them.
At the present time, numerous opinions would suggest that intelligence is measured by success. They think that you would know an intellect through their accomplishments. To elaborate, they say that people with large net profits tend to have a great mind. As a matter of fact, people always praise those mentioned before; as they think they show their intelligence through the success of whatever career they have. For example, Bill Gates is admired by numerous people for his success, which was produced by his amazing mind.
On the other hand, many think that intelligence is measured by someone’s academic position. It is thought that people at the top of the education hierarchy have the greatest minds. People think that whoever has an advanced certificate such as masters for example, have the best comprehensive capacity. As a matter of fact, a college professor would be thought to be one of the best people to teach a class; due to their intellect which is shown through their position in the educational career.
As has been mentioned before, I think that intelligence should be measured by the respect that people gain for their great mind. Although, the opinions stated before have great point of views; to calculate intelligence by the aims done by intellects or by their educational background. However, I would say people would know the ability of someone through the respect they gain from their admirers. For example, Shakespeare is known for his great mind as his words are always favored by numerous people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 265, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...gnize the praise that someone gets from the people around them. At the present time, numerous opinion...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for example, i think, such as, as a matter of fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0396039604 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77184500795 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481848184818 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5958415889 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.8 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357088785907 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134870504879 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105911781809 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238382125452 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407172389068 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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