The diagram shows how biofuel product called ethanol is produced

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The diagram shows how biofuel product called ethanol is produced

The diagram below shows the process of how ethanol is made.
Ten stages are shown on this process. It is beginning with energy from sunlight and carbon dioxide and ending with carbon dioxide.
At the first stage the process is needed to energy like sunlight and carbon dioxide because it will be used in the second step in the plants and trees grow then people will wait plants and trees to grow up then harvesting come to converts plants and trees to small pills can do the pre-processing and it is the fourth stage. In the fifth stage and the midway it will be cellulose can used it in chemical processing.
The other half of the road, cellulose is entered the operation to process then it will convert to sugars, but it can’t be alone workers should add something in the next step so in the step eight microbes are added to can get an ethanol that has many uses. Ethanol is used like as the fuel, but it improves engine performance, so it used in cars, trucks and plans. At the end, by the exhaust from cars and trucks it will converts to carbon dioxide back to the atmosphere to recycle this process.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires base form of the verb: 'use'.
Suggestion: use
...and the midway it will be cellulose can used it in chemical processing. The other h...
^^^^
Line 4, column 420, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires base form of the verb: 'convert'.
Suggestion: convert
...he exhaust from cars and trucks it will converts to carbon dioxide back to the atmospher...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45098039216 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25724515934 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504901960784 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.9654191711 43.030603864 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 113.5 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0719171786542 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562196633914 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119202168228 0.0843802449381 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102743950363 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154159600786 0.0819641961636 188% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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