Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence,while others think intelligence can be measured in other ways.
What’s your opinion?
It is argued that both people life style and intelligence have a significant effect on success. This essay agrees with that cleverness makes the success path shorter. For example, knowledge of many numbers of tools such as programming, math calculators’ programs and artificial intelligence websites that can be considered as a positive way to reduce neither time nor working efforts. However, missing one of these skills can influence on efficiency for achieving the required goals unless people have what the success needs which it is consistency and discipline.
In recent years, people have been interested in the relation between intelligence and success in order to produce more genius scientists, researchers. This is often results in an increase in the society position between other nations. Moreover, the current researchers, like Alon Mask, have started designing a chip that installed in brain for saving memories, personal information and skills. As long as that electrical chip connected to brain nerves, faster complicated calculations can be analyzed. As a result, the upgraded generation of people will most probably produce other sufficient programs which its pavs the road for more technology that using in a numerous people life sector.
On the other side, some people argue that intelligence is not the primary measurement to success. For example, practice skills can be considered as one of the keys to success because success often requires a hard work and discipline which results in an experience. Practically, facing the real world and communication skill can be more critical than being genius but lazy. In society, some positions requires more than intelligent however problem solving skills should be obtained such as, political jobs which require an immediate solution for many events. If people could have these positive skills, they will probably have the ability to success even they are not genius.
In conclusion, the way to success is affected by people life style and discipline not only being a genius. Thus, intelligence can be obtained. In my opinion, success requires not only intelligence, but also it involves communication skills and experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42397660819 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91804222352 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546783625731 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4645742965 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.117647059 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1176470588 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322565002564 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113793705868 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866261093981 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205667918695 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341511008509 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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