Some people say that the increasing use of modern technology has made work a lot easier and quicker to accomplish. Others, however, argue that it has only made people busier.
“The best technology is aimed far enough in the future that it stands out, but close enough to the present that it blends in”. It is agreed that Technology is a double edged weapon it will bring in many benefits, but also many disasters. The use of tech depends on the user and the owner whether it takes a role in wars or in a company to be used by workers. At this point, this essay will discuss whether technology has made people busier or it made work a lot easier and quicker to accomplish.
Many people believe that the development of any county relies on the utilization of technology. The most benefited field from the development of technology is the field of learning, and it can be seen in the past three years due to coronavirus. Using technology to enhance learning is an incredibly exciting idea, and as an area of education is growing fast. Computers and the internet have transformed education. Computers store a huge amount of data in a very small space, shrinking the shelves of reference books in a single flash drive. Online education has provided unprecedented learning opportunities to people all over the world. For instance, there is a field where technology has changed it 180 degrees is the healthcare industry. Advancements in diagnostic tools permit doctors to identify health problems early, improving the odds of successful life-saving treatments. Modern medicine allows patients to manage their chronic conditions that were once debilitating and life-threatening, such as diabetes and hypertension.
“Imagine a power outage. You know, the kind we had just a few years ago on our supposedly modern power grid. The kind that isn’t supposed to happen. The kind that brought an entire coast of our country grinding to a halt. But as our thirst for power increases and our infrastructure fails to keep pace with it (and it really is nowhere near to keep pace with it)”said by John M. Grohol. Some people may argue that technology has been making life worse because people are becoming lazy and replacing their lives with technology every day, although it depends on the person using it and how he thinks of it.
In summary, technology has changed our life in the past decades in many fields, such as education, health and communication. Technology has made a variety of options that we have and misusing any of these options could lead to a destructive environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: NO_SPACE_CLOSING_QUOTE[1]
Message: There should be a space after a closing quote.
Suggestion: ” said
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so, for instance, in summary, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1998.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90909090909 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85953921909 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562653562654 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0644683924 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1428571429 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.380952381 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262534262387 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554003924368 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892023148599 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140335439807 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762337212364 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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