Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination. Others think money and appearance are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There has been a heated debate that whether hard work and determination can build up achievements or money and appearance are able to do that remains a source of controversy in modern society. Based on these arguments, this essay will check both points of view and then I will give my perspective on the matter.
On the one hand, many people strongly believe hard work to be the key to success. First and foremost, it takes many millionaires and billionaires years through challenges, patience, bravery, and failures leading to a large number of aged man among successful ones. For example, Thomas Edison - a huge inventor of all times, had gone through thousands of trials with errors, and eventually succeeded in inventing the light bulb. Secondly, trials and errors are considered to be the key to be financial high-flyers, who have been believed to pay homage to their own achievements. That is because their possessions have been achieved due to their satisfying all the demands for the job through hard working.
On the other hand, a number of people suppose money and appearance would mainly pavé the way for being successful. For instance, in several cases, a higher ability to be accepted when going on an interview is undeniable. In other words, well-dressed candidates can be considered to focus on that interview and even their job seriously. It, therefore, makes a real contribution to building up reliance between employers and candidates, and even towards prestige in the future.
In conclusion, although both views certainly have some validity, it seems to me that it is better to exert ourselves to succeed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 215, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ience, bravery, and failures leading to a large number of aged man among successful ones. For exa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05204460967 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89633655367 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628252788104 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9141957683 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.25 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142731951122 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513246396664 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050991246697 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872281297749 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288641563875 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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