It is believed by some people that automation and advancement of technologies has made their life convulsed while other's think it made life more slacked. In my opinion, Technology is one of the most important factor which gave a wings to human life to live and fly with whole liberty. it provides a wheel to drive the life effectively. It's undoubtedly has made people's life easier at present.
Let's turning to the view where people considered that, technology has made their life complicated.The major reason behind this consideration is because lack of knowledge of using technology based things around them. For instance, one who belongs to town, will be asked by someone to use Microwave oven to cook food which is one the most widely machine used by people in urban areas in their kitchen while cooking. At this moment, importance of advancement of technology will not be perceived by someone rather it would give an impression of complexity.
Furthermore, while travelling to airports or more super markets people still hesitate to use electronic elevators to commute. Which gives them a feeling of hesitation and embarrassment to not knowing the automation development around them. There are some more major factors which surfaced on people thoughts with regards to technology complexity like processed food , disappearance of manual errands, availability of huge equipment's ranges from someone's household to their work place like automated washing machine ,roti maker ,dish-washer and many more. The existence of this equipment's not only made one's life short but also has made depended and difficult to use without sufficient knowledge to particulars.
On the other hand, I really concur from the contention that yes technology as really made human life easier to live. Technology shown its popularity and importance in every sector of human's life like Education sector, health care, Space exploration, Reformation and developments around the globe and in aviation industry. Involvement of technology in people life has change their convergence , attitudes towards life to live. Take the example, illustrating one's daily life from his/her morning which starts by automated alarm to rouse them, smart watches used by people to track their health on the 24*7 basis generally while jogging in the morning, availability of automated stoves, microwave ovens , toaster not only save their time to cook food but encourage to learn new cooking items, Automated vehicles which not only stimulates the hunger to ride them but also provides a comfortable journey. Apart from this, Technology played a major in role in Health sector by introducing the fully automated, highly designed machines to cure people's from any of the world's disease. While, smart phone or smart gadgets are the most prominent gifts of technical implementations through which one can travel the world only his/her finger tips. Technology has really made one life simple.
To conclude, it's true to consider the usefulness of technology has made free fly and easy.
- some people say that history subject the waste of time of student. But other believe that history subject is the best way to know about past. Discuss both side and give your opinion 67
- Some people think that technology has made our life too complex. However, other people think that it has made our life easier. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, really, so, still, while, apart from, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 41.998997996 188% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2571.0 1615.20841683 159% => OK
No of words: 482.0 315.596192385 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33402489627 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.839083169 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 176.041082164 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539419087137 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 831.6 506.74238477 164% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.2805008461 49.4020404114 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.315789474 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3684210526 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304591052296 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119960321393 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101404730654 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192155770546 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110796021264 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 78.4519038076 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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