Some people think technology makes life complex, so we should make life simpler without using technology. Agree or disagree ?
Nowadays, it is believed that technological developments lead people to complexity life, so we should get rid of it. Personally, I disagree with this idea.
There are some reasons why people said that life with technology has been problematic and they would like to live without this innovation. first, technology has made people develop several diseases. For example, when you strain your eyes looking at computer and the device screens, it can cause people to need glasses much earlier in the life and using the headphones can cause people to lose their hearing over time. second, the technology causes a lack of privacy. Since, anyone can use virus and hacking to help them find the information they want to obtain. Therefore, people should simplify the influences of technology in our life.
however, it is undeniable that human gain benefit from technological advances. first information technology is assisting human being a lot in communication. for instance, unlike in the past, currently people use the internet not only to keep in touch with their friends and family but also to get valuable information around the world. second, technological developments also contributes to the development of healthcare system, which helps doctor detect and cure serious diseases. As the result, patients' lives may be improved. Third, development in technology allows people to save a great deal of time to enjoy their life instead of doing the chores such as baking several food items, washing clothes and sweeping floors. Therefore,modern technology plays an important role in busy life today.
In conclusion, on the whole, based on above discussion, I agree that the revolutionary of technology has both pros and cons. however, the demerits will be overshadowed by merits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, third, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34982332155 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92526582332 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643109540636 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.8344251267 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0588235294 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94117647059 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292700766911 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877474433973 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808851220345 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178348936084 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909590732764 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.