Living in big a city is bad for health. To what extent do you agree or disagree
People have different views about whether living in a big city is bad to urban citizen'health. In my opinion, this trend could have both negative and positive consequences in human being's health.
On the one hand, there are some health advantages when living in a big city. Firstly, city dwellers can easy access fitness centre to improve their health and relieves stress, whereas these places might not be provided in the countryside. Secondly,compare to their counterparts living in a rural areas, urban citizens might be able to use better health facilities and technologies that can treat effectively various of diseases such as cancer, diabetes and so on
On the other hand, I believe that some physical and mental health problems would likely to be the result of city life.In term of mental health impact, urbanites handle stress much worse than their country counterparts. this is because city dwellers face encounter environmental stressors more often.In term of physical health impact, air pollution is the key reason lead to some serious health complain including asthma and lung cancer. For example, in India and China, emission from residential heating and cooking perseverance air pollution by creating unhealthy smoke.
In conclusion, living in a considerable metropolis is convenient, but we should consider our health when we choose where to live
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38425925926 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8711729762 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.080654292 49.4020404114 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.375 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.375 7.06120827912 232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225967119558 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103024087362 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543146148841 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133304817698 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215773914917 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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