some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. other think that adult life brings happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
discuss both these views and give your own opinion
It is often said that youth is the most joyful period of person's life. However, this issue in not entirely straightforward, and arguments can also be made against the idea. This essay will discuss the debate, and give a concluding view.
On the one hand people who born in wealthy family are more likely to experience a happy life because facilities are easily provided for them. The adulthood is the age when many are tempted to experience new situations as the more adventurous their life becomes, the happier and exciting life they have. Another argument is the emotional support which received from their parents, so the more peace and confidence they have, the happier they will be. Finally, People who experience a rewarding friendship at school, learn to share and express their emotional feeling with others will have happier life.
By contrast, opponent of this view-point out that although some young people enjoy their adulthood, there are some who aren't be able to give their basic needs due to poverty. Effort to have more income, prohibited them to enjoy their youth like their peers. In addition, many people lived in unstable family because of unemployment and economic turbulence. So it's not possible for them to offer an acceptable life for their teenagers. Finally doing a lot of home work and lessons maybe the other reason which causes teenager have to devote a great among of their time to doing homework and don’t have enough time to enjoy with their classmate.
Overall youth is the milestone of each person's life. if you wealthy enough to give facilities for a happier life.
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- some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. other think that adult life brings happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. discuss both these views and give your own opinion 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, may, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50540157201 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3657409533 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4285714286 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138114693885 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530751534444 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362470373196 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865172607714 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0126062884944 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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