Nowadays there is an ongoing debate between people that student should should focus in all school subject to gain knowledge about different innovations of the modern world.However, some argue that students should get chance to learn according to their interest. This essay will discuss both views and provide a valuable opinion.
Some people nowadays adore the ideology that student should learn all the school subjects to gain knowledge about different innovations and technology which are important in this modern era and the school contains subjects like history and litrecture which help student to learn about glory, custom and tradition of their particular country. To illustrate clearly, the survey conducted by nepal in 1991 has told that Nepalese people has reflected the great art by lord gautam buddha, which is famous all over the world and it has also recorded in the worlds book.
Additionally, it can be significant for student to do according to their interest. Student can do better if they get chance to do in what they are most interested.If the pupils are interested on music then they can do a lot in that field also their is a great demand of musicians in the world. Their is an example of great lady sakira who is from the small town of uk and she has now made her country so proud by her songs and dance.Moreover, it can be a great conflict for pupils if they can't do what they want and some also can be a victim of heart diseases and some may also attempt suside.
To conclude, i believe that it is necessary for students to learn all the school subject to get information about what is happening in the country. However, i also think that they should get chance to do according to their interest for their satisfaction and also to show their talent to the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77564102564 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58341286383 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474358974359 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.80329212 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.555555556 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.6666666667 20.7667163134 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263030700525 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108010253985 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691096058234 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168099741699 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270689721996 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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