Nowadays, news becomes part of people lives. Although the obvious benefits it brings is undeniable, there are some drawbacks that have negative impact on the inhabitant life, especially children. However, I disagree with this idea, and in my opinion, the valuable knowledge we gained from news do outweigh its disadvantage.
To begin with, with the advancement of technology, the resident in the present day can update the worldwide news with just one click on their mobile devices. For example, the planning for outdoor activities relies upon the predicted weather on their mobile application in the next several days. Moreover, there are numerous programs available on television with various content ranging from science, education to language which helps youngster to enhance their knowledge. Most resources and useful information in this era are also available on the Internet where everyone can access easily.
On the other hand, the negative effect brought by the news media can not be denied. First, most children’s personality is not fully developed yet which is easily influenced by some negative content such as violence and adult. As a result, they have a tendency to imitate the character of their favourite games which is harmful and may even injure themselves. Therefore, to solve this, a more stringent policy to restrict the content for children program should be published. Moreover, due to the competition between magazine companies, some published news give wrong information. Thus, the minority of people may harm the aforementioned people on the news because of their overreaction. In my opinion, the company, which give wrong information, should receive a severe punishment to protect the citizen.
In conclusion, although there are some drawbacks brought by the news media, it became part of our lives. Therefore, we should be self-conscious to absorb information. Finally, the more concern from parents and the government will help children develop in a right path.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42628205128 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89455374863 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5658236802 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5882352941 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3529411765 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.88235294118 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237798220133 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693211635349 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547632236443 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137746233214 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747472381211 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.