Some people think that there is a great influence of news media on people’s lives and this is a negative development. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and relevant examples.
Nowadays, technology becomes part of people lives. Although the obvious benefits it brings is undeniable, there are some drawbacks that have negative impact on the inhabitant life, especially children. However, I disagree with this idea, and in my opinion, the advantage of technology do outweigh the disadvantage.
To begin with, with the advancement of technology, the resident in the present day can update the worldwide news with just one click on their mobile devices. Moreover, there are numerous programs on television with various content ranging from science, education to language which help youngster to enhance their knowledge. Most resources in this era also available on the Internet where everyone can access easily. For example, we can download a book while sitting at home or watching a video about the wildlife of animals while moving on a bus.
On the other hand, the negative effect brought by the news media can not be denied. First, most of children hobbies are playing computer games which of most the content is violence content. As a result, they have a tendency to imitate the character of their favourite games which may harm their body or even injured. Moreover, sitting on a couch for too long may lead the children to get accustomed to the sedentary lifestyle, which is the reason for numerous serious diseases. However, in my opinion, with a more stringent policy to restrict the content for children program and encouraging them to do some outdoor activities such as playing sports and doing exercises would be enough.
In conclusion, although there are some drawbacks brought by the advancement technology, its benefits and the more concern from parents and the government will help children develop in a right path.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the children') or simply say ''most children''.
Suggestion: most of the children; most children
...he news media can not be denied. First, most of children hobbies are playing computer games whic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17894736842 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70035507167 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589473684211 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6534225666 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.538461538 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4615384615 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15405743487 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551577131011 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553724014345 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924853604873 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640553147376 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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