It is assumed sometimes that news media has got great impact on people's lives and is not a healthy way of development. I agree this statement to an extent. Below, we'll discuss about how media led people to a negative side and affecting the Development.
Media always play an important role in the modern word where people are educated about all the happenings around the world. However, incorrect news spread across impact people to understand in a negative way and leads to the other side of progress. For instance, Korean President Kim Jong was projected as a terrorist and potential threat to the world. But, he is not. He's working on the progress of his country and protecting it. When false information circulates around the world, it will disregard a person or a cult or a society and induce a hatred feeling on them which weakens the development.
We all get updates on Scientific progress, advancement around the globe, new launches, great achievements through Media. In other words, media is educating us and improving our standard of lives. what if the news we are updated on is misleading? Let's take an example, there was an organisation called Conspiracy Theory which proves that Man never landed on Moon. It has got it's own strong logic and makes people believe that logic. This could make a child understand that whatever he learn in the school is not true which is again a dark shade of our future.
News, if it's true or fake always got a great impact on people's lives. It's always important to have a proper check on the news circulated. Otherwise, it will have a negative outcome and affect the development.
- Some people think that there is a great influence of news media on people s lives and this is a negative development Do you agree or disagree with this statement Give your opinion and relevant examples 76
- Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...read across impact people to understand in a negative way and leads to the other side of progress...
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Suggestion: He's
...al threat to the world. But, he is not. Hes working on the progress of his country ...
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Suggestion: What
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'learns'.
Suggestion: learns
...ake a child understand that whatever he learn in the school is not true which is agai...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79787234043 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65986995994 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578014184397 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5255057294 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1666666667 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235435067061 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724974349971 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699734197093 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165860345167 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106609785154 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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