Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Noise pollution has become inevitable nowadays, due to the increasing population and industries. I personally believe that there should be stringent laws imposed to curb noise by people, industries, and vehicles. In this essay, I will discuss further on the importance of controlling noise pollution.

There are several disadvantages of noise pollution. To begin with, one of the inevitable problems in the city is traffic, which in turn results in increased noise from vehicle motors and loud horn. To exemplify, even small vehicles like bikes are installed with a loud horn without following the standard rules. Similarly, machinery in industries does not adhere to the quality norms and use of old or unserviced equipment. This causes huge noise and results in hearing impairment and other health issues for the employees.

Controlling noise pollution is crucial. Firstly, the Government should enact laws to curb noise pollution and stringent steps should be taken to monitor if people do not follow the norm. Industries should be inspected at regular intervals to check whether proper noise control measures were taken. The government should conduct an awareness program to spread the importance of controlling noise pollution and the impact if it's not followed

In conclusion, I strictly iterate, it is Government’s responsibility to take necessary steps to control noise pollution and create awareness program to inculcate law to practice. to take care of the welfare of the citizens.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, similarly, so, in conclusion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48068669528 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9938752586 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600858369099 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 70.1691953519 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2307692308 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153464778553 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577319068638 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419728003401 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927809723749 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442524255988 0.056905535591 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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