It is true that nowadays, many people got famous at a young age with the help of numerous opportunities presented to them. While some people believe that it is a good thing while others believe otherwise. I personally believe, becoming famous at a young age is not an issue, but how you handle and make use of the opportunity plays a critical role.
With the advent of the digital platform, youngsters are exposed to a lot of opportunities, which help them to present their talent and get recognized irrespective of their age. Youngsters should be taught how to handle their popularity along with the personal life so that they can make use of it to create a flourishing carrier. To exemplify, if a person becomes a famous singer at a young age, he/she should be taught how to handle both education and singing hand in hand. Furthermore, a healthy guidance and healthy mindset of the youngster is very important to shape a good future.
There are some disadvantages as well, teenage is a critical time where they tend to fall prey to bad habits. Teenagers who are famous at a young age, will not have the maturity to handle it. This will eventually spoil their education as well as not taking their talent in the right direction. for instance, if they start earning at a young age, they tend to misuse the money and got addicted to bad habits.
In conclusion, although getting famous at a young age is not a bad thing, but a proper guidance and a good attitude are required to utilize the opportunity and shape a successful future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67279411765 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71975096417 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514705882353 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.694184838 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.916666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415374777892 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142044855614 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10709172786 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270748678947 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122772551302 0.056905535591 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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