The given bar chart illustrates the difference in the average hours of doing housework weekly between married men and women.
Overall, married women always spend more time doing household chores compared to men. Besides, the more children the women have the more amount of unpaid work they must do and the more time they have to sacrifice.
Within a week, married men who have no children spend nearly 20 hours doing housework, which is the same as men who have one to two children. By contrast, men with 3 or more children spend less time childcaring, house working or gardening, which are about 17 hours per week.
Turning to women's unpaid working hours, married ones with no child spend 30 hours, only 10 hours higher than married men. However, when they have 1 or 2 children, they have to sacrifice more than 50 hours per week doing household chores. When these women have 3 or more children, the figure surges to 60 hours per week, that triple the average working hours of men with the same condition.
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- The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person in an Australian university 61
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...k weekly between married men and women. Overall, married women always spend more...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 177.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70621468927 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26866937566 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 176.041082164 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536723163842 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 18.3711730709 49.4020404114 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.125 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00490402881661 0.244688304435 2% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00265041265628 0.084324248473 3% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00701233276022 0.0667982634062 10% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00384012226278 0.151304729494 3% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0066512868664 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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