Some people think that they can create as much noise as they want, while others think that the amount of noise people make should be strictly controlled.
Discuss both the views.
In this contemporary society, opinions are divided whether noises should be freely created or strictly managed by individuals as well as organisations. From my personal perspective, I hold a firm belief that it is important to control the amount of noise in an area.
For a variety of reason, it would be unjustifiable to ban residents from making noises. The main reason is that creating noise should be consider personal right. Hence, as long as this action does not violate any laws or rules, people should be permitted to be noisy in their personal spaces. Other than that, regarding noises, it is undeniable that in modern world, there has been a number of occupations that involve making excessive sounds. Taking construction site as an example, when a building is under construction, noises coming tools and machines used at these areas are inevitable. Therefore, prohibiting noises in constructing seems to be redundant.
Apart from the abovementioned practical concerns, several harmful effects can be indicated to prove that it is vital to control noises. One of the note-worthy consequences of exceeding noise is severe health-related problems. This is because an enormous amount of noise can stress people out as they have to listen to different sounds. Consequently, they can suffer from some mental issues, such as depressions, which can be extremely dangerous for some people, particularly the elderly or pregnant women. Further pressure of excessive noise also includes noise pollution. When noises are created simultaneously at an area, this will result in chaotic living environment, which will then destroy the city’s image.
Taking everything into consideration, this reinforces my perspective that due to several detrimental effects, such as serious health problems and noise pollution, unnecessary noise should be strictly limit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'considered'?
Suggestion: considered
...reason is that creating noise should be consider personal right. Hence, as long as this ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47569444444 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07457582327 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621527777778 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.281547831 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.133333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339163607585 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110908054797 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517968431464 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19918338953 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464752887327 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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