Everyone has their own preferred study method and all of them have their own strengths and weaknesses. In my point of view, it is better to have a self-study method rather than working with a teacher. I fell this based on two major reasons which are discussed throughout this essay.
To begin with, the most important privilege of self-study is related to finance, to prevent concerning further financial problems. This means class enrollments and teachers hiring required paying a large amount of money, however, the study on your own would be more reasonable in price and also much more effective than paying to a teacher and be concerned about your financial problems at the end. According to my personal experience, when I was a junior programmer in a software company I extremely intended to learn some programming languages for getting a promotion. The professional programming classes were so expensive and I earned not much money to afford my financial problem and attend such classes at the same time. Hence I decided to do self-study and finally, I have got that promotion without spending a lot of money on learning. So, for those with low incomes studying by themselves would be much more beneficial than focusing on both studying and financial problems while studying with the tutor.
Finally, studying without tutor is more enjoyable and effective than with teacher because students could have their own method of study. In fact, many people believe that teachers could force students to focus on study or they can help students to avoid distractions, however, sometimes it has an adverse effect and their traditional methods cause distraction and dissatisfaction. Each person has his/her own way of understanding or his/her own type of perception so that self-study prevents people to follow other's method of study for understanding. For instance, I myself am a self-disciplined person and my productivity reaches its peak at some specific part of time mostly at noon which mainly was a teacher's break time. In the past, when I was forced to attending a class or studying with another person I had difficulties to concentrate on lessons in the morning but I was productive when the study finished. So I found out my own weaknesses and strengths, designed a firm plan and as a result, my method was effective enough to observe my rapid progression.
To conclude, I strongly believe that the benefits of studying independence without teachers far outweigh its drawbacks. This is because of two major reasons, reasonable finance issues and following your effective way of studying.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 728, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...d attend such classes at the same time. Hence I decided to do self-study and finally,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, however, if, so, while, as for, for instance, in fact, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2177.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 426.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1103286385 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94795401842 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530516431925 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 665.1 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.3699698081 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.058823529 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0588235294 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175707680648 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577405822142 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400371236102 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109107880138 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271978067583 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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