With an increasing population communication via the internet and text messaging face to face communication will become a thing of the past.
To what extend do you agree?
As a result of the dramatic growth of remote transmission via virtual devices, the rate of direct relationship reduces significantly. I totally believe that the social network has a major impact on people's relationships. One of the best ways for sluggish or busy people to communicate is internet and according to statistics, the number of people with these types of characteristics today has a considerable enhancement.
One of the most important reasons of having a remote conversation instead of face to face is laziness. Sluggish people prevent do sports and cannot stand for the difficulties of walking to their friends house, therefore, when, they miss their friends and families, prefer to send a text message instead of visiting them in person, besides, The ease of use of social network leads lazy people to start a communication and enjoy staying at home and watch their favorite TV shows, for instance.
Recently the number of busy people increase rapidly which caused a decline on straightforward communication. As a matter of fact, the lack of time for gathering with the friends or making plans to visit each other would force people to use the internet when they missed their friends. Most of the people in modern life should work all day and spend most of their time at work; in fact, they have to keep in touch with the friends or family via networks. Because the compressed work hours and the exhaustion after work would not allow them to visit their friends and connect them directly in person. So the social network would be a good way to know about each other in the limited rest hours.
In conclusion, the communication via network increase because of laziness and lack of time in modern life, furthermore, as a result of that the straight connection reduces unbelievably.
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'in fact', 'as a matter of fact', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.258358662614 0.247107183377 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.118541033435 0.155533422707 76% => OK
Adjectives: 0.09726443769 0.0946595960268 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0395136778116 0.0501214627716 79% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0395136778116 0.0437548338989 90% => OK
Prepositions: 0.164133738602 0.122226691241 134% => OK
Participles: 0.0212765957447 0.0403226058552 53% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.87871585189 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0334346504559 0.0326793684256 102% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.103343465046 0.0861772015684 120% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0151975683891 0.021408717616 71% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00911854103343 0.011925033212 76% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1801.0 1933.35771543 93% => OK
No of words: 302.0 316.048096192 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.96357615894 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.360927152318 0.374742101984 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.248344370861 0.28420135186 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.149006622517 0.203846283523 73% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0960264900662 0.137316102897 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87871585189 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.037074148 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533112582781 0.56093040696 95% => OK
Word variations: 54.6461984782 60.7387585426 90% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 27.4545454545 20.7743622355 132% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.5644344557 49.517814964 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.727272727 127.492653851 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4545454545 20.7743622355 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.909090909091 0.814263465372 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 52.2889825406 49.1944974215 106% => OK
Elegance: 2.24615384615 1.69124875643 133% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358534374775 0.332605444948 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.146156395639 0.102741220458 142% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0847687580631 0.0668466124924 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.635572500531 0.534860350844 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.196243651605 0.148594505496 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172041987505 0.134430193775 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564191339329 0.0742795772207 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.422393627172 0.324371583561 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0280928621497 0.0638462369009 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252455458805 0.228012699653 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413641975946 0.058150111329 71% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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