some people think that they can make as much noise as they want, while others think that the amount of noise people make should be strictly controlled.
discuss both views and include your opinion and examples.
The majority of people said that they like to produce a sound as much as they want, while the other side said that there must be a related prohibition for this issue. This essay will discuss both of these points of view and argue in favor of the letter.
On the one hand, many people like to do some activities with loud noises, such as music and others to accompany them. Because for many people, is more attractive when we work by listening to music, as it can give them an inspiration or other enlightenment. For the example, I enjoy to finish my work while I listening to the music, I like to sing a song while I finish my essay. It is so fun and it makes a lot of work easier.
On the other hand, many of us sometimes like to do activities with a quiet place or less noise, because they need concentration to finished their work and sometimes to take some rest or for the other reason. Also, we live in neighborhood with many differences. As a proof, old people who cannot hear too much noise because of their condition. So we have to respect it.
In my opinion, I disagree with people who said that they can make a noise as much as they like because for me who like to hear a music, sometime we have to know the limit of out noise. Therefore, we have to respect to the others.
In conclusion, we live together with the others, I believe that many of people are like to make a noise like to play a music or something else. However, we do not know about their behavior whether they like excessive noise or not, so we have to show our politeness to the other..
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 307, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...xample, I enjoy to finish my work while I listening to the music, I like to sing ...
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Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...have to show our politeness to the other..
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23333333333 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476666666667 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.127777772 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7142857143 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249158864516 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864245126606 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070561516436 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159197762971 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489036159721 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 12.4159519038 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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