Some people think that thinking about the future and planning for the future is to be a waste of time. They should simply live in a present moment. Do you agree or disagree?
Majority of masses assets that considering for coming days is a wastage of time, they opine that human should have to enjoy their present moment. However, I entirely withstand this assertion because in this way people doesnot enjoy their present moment but also lost their precious times.
The two possible reasons could be evident that planning for upcoming time would lead people to waste their time by thinking for their fate. First and foremost, dwellers would not live happily if they think about their future at a same moment. As a reason, thanks to the modern era, because of what people are becoming more materialistic and compete with their rivals to achieve the top most level. Even if they would win they donot enjoy, and again begin to compete with others in order to make their future secure and spent their whole life in the same way . Until or unless echelons would not become aware about living happily in their current moment , they will not able to organize a better future.
Secondly , mankind could suffer through the severe stress and tensions. To define it , in order to make their lives easier and convenient in future, people doesnot give adequate time and rest to their personal life. Meanwhile, they emerge too much in their planning and lost their golden period of their lives in organising , till their senescent stage . Besides this people kept on just planning even though they continue with their same procedure throughout their entire life.
In conclusion, it can be confidently conveying that everyone must have to live in a present, if they do so , their future will automatically happier and satisfied.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00729927007 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31945490915 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594890510949 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.0514747847 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.333333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25557570585 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112890650494 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829855744217 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170075848955 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636096682327 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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