Some people think that traditional culture can be destroyed by using it as money making attraction to tourist.however, other believe that it is only way to save traditions. discuss both view and give your opinion.
culture and tradition is a true reflection of any country. Presenting it in front of tourism for sources of handsome revenue is oftenly said to be vanishing it. However section of people assume that this is only way to survive tradition in this modern world. In this essay intend to discuss both view before dropping conclusion.
Beyond doubt, traditional art form, events, music are organised by many countries for attraction of UP Tourism dot perhaps, this form would be understand my native people as it is a part of their tradition. Tobillustrate, that folk dance of Rajasthan reavled for tourist can know about culture of host country and government can generate revenue., sometime tourist could be this type of tradition as they not understand music, dance form and language Thus, such a phenomenon main diminished the traditional culture.
On the other hand, in this era of globalisation and Technology, people are for forgetting the roots. In fact, many culture and traditions are endangered now. It is hour of need to save traditions. Tourism industries are coming step forward as they foster tourism to attend historical music events in this way they also contribute in country's development by source of money. It is also seen that those people are performing for tourist is also contributed in livelihood of many artist. In fact some tourist fascinating events, spend time in research depth. Sovthe countries get benefit more in terms of money and performer artist also appreciate more by such a trend.
In conclusion, i opine that present traditional culture my pleasure The Tourist as they are being well preserved from ancient time and it also beneficial to livelihood of many people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, thus, well, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1148.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14798206278 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86718616421 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600896860987 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.6345979833 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.8 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191846290003 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078097112784 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316899077568 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125783514569 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201564664565 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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