Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of wether the course is useful to an employer.
What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?
Since the universities opened, many people supposed that its function is provide diversity of the knowledge and skill which graduates will need for their future career. But others agures that uiversities is just a place that student come for study reason only. Personally, I am standing on the side of providing knowledge in colleges should be practical in the workplace.
On the one hand, it is believe that student should learn in more much different field which help them broaden horizon instead of it can be used or not . Having said that, student will have understanding in many aspects. Otherwise, it is considered as a reason led to high unemployment rate. Take Vietnam for example, this country are facing a great number of graduates unemployed. Because they only taught what is written in books and those knowledge become useless when they went to work. What is the purpose of knowledge when it can not help the learner? Then time and money for education would be waste.
On other hand, it is clearly that student attend university for not only higher education but also to be prepared for their better future job. And this is the way out for former example, If only in Vietnam pay more attention in teaching necessary skills or to be an expert in a field rather than cram an enormous knowledge which impractical. Obviously, Denmark has done well when they applied tax calculation in Maths and others subjects.
Admittedly, there are merits to both arguments. As far as I concerned, knowledge which obtained by students is for one aim is prepare for a better life. It hard to say that which knowledge is useful or not because we all know it can bring benefit in different aspects not a special ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80677966102 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60809935582 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586440677966 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3190541453 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.625 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259271997851 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766646744236 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760138492929 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16991698542 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103912238158 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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