Some people believe that the earth is being harmed by human activities. Others feel that human activities make the the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion?
We are living in a modern time where people enjoy convinient thanks to the accumulation of many works throught centuires of the former. But some people see to achieve a happiness life at the moment is the consequence of the Earth has been damaged seriously.
With high technology, it is clearly can be seen that our life has been improved and better than few decades ago. Having said that, most of diseas has been found the cures and life expectancy of human are longer than before. People is served with high standard facilities. Poverty and hunger are become less serious and decrease each year passed.
But the price we have to pay for that comfort is natural destroyed. As the population explode leading to the increasing in the need of food and shelter. To meet the need, people cut down trees to farming and build houses. When forests being destroyed by human activities which took away home of wild animal and their life. This is a main reason leading to many species died out.
There is no deny the important of nuclear power in producing effectively energy which save our limited resource. But in other hand, radioactive waste cause a severe damage to environment which take at least one hundred years to be consider as a safety ingredient. Unfortunately, it also being seen as a hazard if nuclear plant explode it can erase human race.
Without a doubt, if any species died out there would be no different on Earth but instead is human, the earth would be return exactly in the first palace. No pollution and animal would keep living in their purity natural. Our activities affected on animal habitant and ourselves too. It high time for us to responsible for our own action.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73559322034 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48230971759 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606779661017 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7570555966 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6111111111 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3888888889 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88888888889 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211262463539 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515039013786 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535748244858 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104530985113 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319710046154 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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