some people think that university admission should be for all student while ther said it should be for the intelligent only.what is stanford's agree if the reasons behind this.
Gone are the days when it was easy to take admission in universities.However, this attitude has undergone since the modernization took place. A few people reckon that enrollment an academic university should be for all students without merit based while 'other seems differently .I demure statement.This essay shall elucidate the reason behind my opinion and ensuing figments .
First and foremost' the reason why the university should take admission on the basis of merit list the students who are eligible only those can take admissions to the university. To be more precise ,if the students have not ability to become a doctor then how can they do study in medical field.For instances one bollywood movie munna bhai MBBS is a great example for the same .who get a degree of MBBS then he was not able to treat the patient due to lackness of the ability.Hence the admission should be on the basis of interest and capability of the student.Secondly university campus always have limited seats so it is not possible to enrolled many students .
However ,it might difficult for those students they may not get a good marks for some reason like physical illness and any other reason so they might be felt unworthy .Nevertheless the merit and fear of higher percentage which is necessary to take admission in universities always make the students strong in study they does hard work in school.Owing to this ,their lot of hard work has work be behind their admission. this spirit make them more hard worker which always helpful for their university study and the universities always need these type of dedicated students which always did hard work .
To recapitulate ,although education should be for all yet admission in university should be based on merit thus the hard worker and intelligent students give best in the academic and give the services to the holistic growth of the country as well as their own life .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, while, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96261682243 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85472472481 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538940809969 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.164250133 49.4020404114 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 227.571428571 106.682146367 213% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.8571428571 20.7667163134 221% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.7142857143 7.06120827912 237% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403258299708 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188243966427 0.084324248473 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836913792212 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254473372298 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347465488642 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.9 13.0946893788 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 11.3001002004 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.38 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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