Some people think that we should focus on processes to be successful in life. Others, however, believe that results are more important.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A successful life is believed to be the ultimate goal of human beings. To succeed in life, it is controversial that whether people should concentrate on the processes or the results. This essay aims to analyze the two polarised viewpoints and express my perspective that life is more than just a destination.
Firstly, as a saying goes: “Life is a journey, not a destination”, focusing on processes is believed to be a crucial factor leading to fulfillment in life. For example, the goal of the university is to satisfy academic pursuits or master specific careers, then live a wealthy life. However, so many students decide to drop even prestigious universities regardless of the promising career paths because the environments do not suit them well. This reality illustrates that the university experience is more important than the results including gradings or the salary you earn after graduating from that tertiary education. Besides, life satisfaction depends on meaningful relationships, which are only made from deep emotional connections. And this kind of connection can only be formed by getting over ups and downs together in a common journey. Therefore, paying attention to moments during each process is believed to contribute to a successful life.
On the contrary, there are plenty of people who keep the belief that the outcomes are the decisive factors leading to an accomplished life. In other words, the significance of the process is based on the value of the outcomes. For instance, when it comes to building a start-up, the journey is so challenging that more than 80 percent of the start-ups cannot last longer than the first year. Only those who can survive from that battle, then make a lot of profit are recognized and praised as a symbol of a successful life. Besides, materialism including financial and social status, which emphasizes rationality represented by tangible recognition, has gained a lot of attention in modern times. This trend also forces people to achieve their planned goals at all costs.
To conclude, although the main motive in creating a successful life is either the experience or the outcomes, my perspective gravitates towards the former factor. In other words, as human beings are superior to other species by their feelings, successful life is not defined by the results only but the emotional connections formed in the process of achieving them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, kind of, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98779458837 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558974358974 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2142117932 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.666666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94444444444 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251761954998 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800007568656 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654700232918 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165836011897 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442208129257 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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