The Impact of television on human beings inevitable irrespect of their age. Section people argue that children are more vulnerable to impact of the TV if they spend more time, while others argue that depends on their choice what they want to see influence them. This essay discuss the both views along with my opinion.
To begin with, whatever watch on television would influenced the
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...evitable irrespect of their age. Section people argue that children are more vu...
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...at they want to see influence them. This essay discuss the both views along wi...
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...ence them. This essay discuss the both views along with my opinion. To begi...
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...ith, whatever watch on television would influenced the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 41.998997996 29% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 323.0 1615.20841683 20% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 65.0 315.596192385 21% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96923076923 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.83941151443 4.20363070211 68% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3053321264 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 49.0 176.041082164 28% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.753846153846 0.561755894193 134% => OK
syllable_count: 97.2 506.74238477 19% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.8677595515 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.75 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352735457336 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172033917516 0.084324248473 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439205950442 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257256004322 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289545792591 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 78.4519038076 20% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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