some people think when a person travels into a different culture they should adapt to the local practices and customs. what extent do you agree or disagree?
For the past ten years, tourism has become the backbone industry of many countries. However, tourism can create conflicts at times between people from different cultures when difffering beliefs collide. Therefore, it is often suggested that people should follow the local lifestyles of the country they visit. From my perspective, I strongly agree/disagree with this motion.
At the outset, it is undeniable that people will find the adaption to a foreign culture an opportunity to develop themselves. Initially, in all likelihood, understanding and accepting another tradition will exert a profound impact on the formation of their personality. These completely new lifestyles can make them see things around them in different perspectives along with learn to accept and respect others’ differences, which will be the fundamental foundation helping them become a global citizen. Being more open-minded, they will find it easier to create their own unique values drawing on all traditional practices they experience and become the best version of themselves. Apart from that, turning other cultures into a part of their life can stimulate the capacity to adapt flexibly to different situations which is regarded one of the most crucial skills for future jobs. It is highly likely that they will be willing to respond to everything with a positive attitude as well as change their habits and seek new methods of doing things with the aim of intensifying their productivity and achieving the best results.
Furthermore, not only does it adaption have inspiring influence on the visitors themselves but it also nourish mutual understanding and healthy relationships between countries. Individuals will no longer feel secluded from the community or even offended in a completely new place but be capable of making peers and getting along with local people much more easily if they have the willingness to embrace other customs. As a result, this can avoid creating severe tensions between two distinct cultural background and more importantly, bridge the gap between diverse cultures. Adjusting to local traditional rituals is the best way to building and developing a close bond among different part of the word.
To recapitulate, I wholeheartedly believe it is essential for tourists to adapt to distinct traditional cultures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nourishes'?
Suggestion: nourishes
... on the visitors themselves but it also nourish mutual understanding and healthy relati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, apart from, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1979.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46685082873 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00672937555 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591160220994 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2483685028 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.933333333 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1333333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188611733248 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614172479711 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442305049569 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107113944715 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520624105962 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.