People have different views about whether animals should be kept in restricted places such as zoos. While some presume that they must live in the wild, I strongly agree with those who believe that they should be free and both views will be discussed in this essay.
There are several reasons why it is argued that keeping animals in zoos is advantageous. In recent years, many animals have been hunted by humans, and the habitat of some animals have been destroyed by climate change. because of this, keeping them in zoos can be beneficial. For example, doing so, we can prevent the extinction of pandas by scientific supervision in such specific places. Furthermore, people who have no experience of seeing these beautiful animals have a chance to watch them. Lastly, watching them in zoos can be pleasant for kids who were taught about them in their books and their imagination can be improved.
Nevertheless, I would argue that keeping any kind of beasts in captivity has many disadvantages. For instance, being kept in cages, animals may suffer from some mental disorders. For example, animals which were raised in captivity have different behavior from their wild counterparts, such as anxiety which is a result of being in one place. Furthermore, the size of the muscles could be reduced by lying down in zoos where they are fed by the animals' park authorities. Because of this, they can not search for food and prey or run. Moreover, they have been created to be in a free place not being in cages so the matter could be harmful to them in any kind of captivity.
To conclude, although it seems true that zoos can be beneficial to not only animals but also humans, I highly believe if humans let them leave in nature animals would benefit more.
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, lastly, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75265017668 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44822015301 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551236749117 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.825874837 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.083333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334999419402 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117776944225 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520812458908 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189838769766 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630288547492 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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