Some people think young people should be free to choose their job, while others believe that they should be realistic and think about their future.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
To young people, one of the most necessary things to do is choosing jobs. when coming to this matter, there are mainly two divided opinions: youngsters should have the freedom to opt for their careers and the youth need to reflect carefully before deciding to dedicate their lives to an occupation.
Nowadays, children are no longer controlled by their parents when they are above eighteen. they have the right to go after the job that they are interested in. if a person has to do a job which he or she does not like, he or she will never pay full attention and put enough effort into that. people who have a job they do not want will always feel bored and aimless. However, when we have the freedom to chase after what we want, we will dedicate ourselves to it. A person loving animals will choose to be a vet. As a result, he or she will find this field interesting. he or she will always be happy with their lives. Therefore, the idea that the young should have the freedom to chose their career is approved widely.
On the other side, young people need to be practical and choose their future job carefully. A job not only makes life meaningful but brings about skills and income to people as well. The young can not sacrifice everything to pursue their dreams. Their lives require income, expenditure, savings, and so on. for this reason, youngsters should think reasonably before choosing a job. if a person having a desire for music has failed numerous times in trying to be a singer, he or she should think of changing into a new field. In conclusion, the idea discussed above is sensible and helpful.
In my opinion, I approve of the second opinion. one's life depends much on his or her job. if a person has to change his or her job too many times, they will have an unstable economy basis. In this modern life, without money, humans can not do anything. To conclude, the young, who are inexperienced, should be realistic and think about future jobs carefully; we should not choose a career based on only our favorites.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55585831063 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40885804772 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525885558583 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2912308187 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6956521739 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9565217391 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13043478261 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351589759578 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983490688011 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886099343043 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223186144232 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0996396220091 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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