Some people think that young people should be required to do unpaid work helping people in the community. Are disadvantages of this requirement greater than the benefits for the community and individuals?
Social service is moral responsiblity of every individual for the community. A recent decade are witness of development in social sector. Amid this development, there is one phenomenon that has associated with it. In order to this phenomenon, every younger people ought to be needed to cater their service at free of cost for helping people in community. But there are several advantages related to work for free for society outweigh the drawbacks that are connected with it. I will try that throw light upon pros and cons of doing job for society at free. Also, I will try to posit my perspective about it.
To commence with, there are multifarious positive aspects to shore those people who are in favor of play a social role without expecting anything in return. First and foremost reason is that adult people have profound knowledge about education and technology. Thereby, they are possible to provide their knowledge and skill for that community who has lack of education and financially poor for complete their schooling. This may result in making productive and creative society for further future. The another merit is that they can not cater only education and skill but also attained some retirement home for spending some time with helpless people, they can make them happy by cracking some jokes or perform some entertainment act in front of them. Thus, they are proud if themselves as they are pivotal part of community. Because our ancestors say that " laughter is the best medicine in the world". Hence, these are potential benefits if young generation work for society for free.
On the other side of spectrum, despite having positive aspects, it also have some negative aspects. The predominant impact is working as a volunteer may distract the adult from their priorities. For instance, students who have the extensive burden of education and complete assignment or preparation for assessment. Therefore, they do not have much leisure time to work for society but in their free time they play some sport for relaxation. As a result of working in charity may led to suffer from some mental disorder.
Aggelomerating, all the point I elaborated an above, it can be concluded that plethora of harmful effect social worker if they are doing it with some other task but it tend to positive impact for society to make quality livelihood and productive society. That is why, I support those people who are in favor of social worker has been played their role without hoping any cost. Hence, it is more fruitful in my opinion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2134.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 427.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99765807963 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65252439747 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51756440281 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 692.1 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7802361432 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7826086957 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5652173913 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13043478261 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23724285677 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654517688939 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590351874848 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145750724436 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444912704569 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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