Some people think that young people should go to university to further their education while others think that they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders to serve society.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The younger generation is the indispensable element that will be needed to assist the world in the future. Nowadays, myriad citizens advocate that youngesters must enroll to a college in order to enhance their academic skills. Nonetheless, many people deny the aforementioned argument and they want to urge teenagers to participate on serving commuitiy. I firmly support the former view due to the fierce competition which occur in work opportunities.
On the one hand, a plethora of people tend to boost young generation to incorporate to the university that will provide them with a lot of beneficial impact,such as escalating their knowledge, earning more experience in working together with other, and soaring their chance to obtain the best future. Also, they can utilizing this circumstance to accelerate their confidence on socializing with others.
On the other hand, array of citizens advise them to accomplish more social service which could help communities. Eventhough this activity has merits for the; for example, gaining more socializing skill and experiences in practical skill, it also has drawbacks; for instance, lack of knowledge and the job they do does not generate enough money to fullfill their daily needs.
In a nutshell, i want to bloster my aforementioned view that partake in university is the best choice, since it could raise our academic skill as well as social skill in the future.
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- Some people think that young people should go to university to further their education while others think that they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders to serve society Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- Some people think that young people should go to university to further their education while others think that they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders to serve society Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
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...ould raise our academic skill as well as social skill in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, nonetheless, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30088495575 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98234027442 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615044247788 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.2179752591 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.111111111 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1111111111 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4444444444 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1362568211 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525912121696 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349128481068 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773835584372 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420027758669 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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