Some people think that zoos are cruel and that all zoos should be closed. However, others think that zoos are useful for protecting rare animals.
both views and give your own opinion.
Zoo are used for protecting animal particularly some of them which are under danger of extinction. People are split on this matter, some of them think zoo are the best place for preserve animals from any danger while other acclaim that human have no right to imprison any beasts in a zoo.
Some of the animal need special sort of habitat that zoo can not provide it and try to construct a small pilot for them. Lack of suitable habitat causes serious problems for animals. The best example for this, is a lion which live in the zoo. Lions have a wild nurture which eradicate by living in the zoo’s cage where gives them meat freely. Consequently, they forget about running and hunting which led to be lazy. Apart from this, they can no longer live in the jungle or anywhere except zoo.
In spite of all possible disadvantages of zoo, it should be noted that based on the hunting’s abundance of beasts by human, it is better to keep animals in the zoo where can live in safety and without threatening any hunters. For instance, researches show that epidemic diseases have a big proportion of animal death. Human activities and cutting down the trees, both, together have lessen animals’ habitat to the nearly half. It is no wonder why some animals have better life in the zoo than other places.
With these in mind, both of these opinions are partly right, it gives me the sense that this debate do not really led anywhere fruitful. In my view point, government must set a high property crime for hunters while set strict rules for zoos and oblige them to enhance the quality of cages and animal habitat.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...ight to imprison any beasts in a zoo. Some of the animal need special sort of habitat tha...
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Line 5, column 389, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'lessened'.
Suggestion: lessened
...ing down the trees, both, together have lessen animals' habitat to the nearly hal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, really, so, while, apart from, for instance, sort of, in my view, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6724738676 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3910767436 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1131554761 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7857142857 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324078258581 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11238906684 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665817949821 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198581700458 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574759721913 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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