There are some different views about what should be included in the high-school curriculum. This raises the question of whether academic subjects including history and physics should be taught or practical skills like mechanical or gardening. From my point of view both of them are beneficial and essential for pupils.
Some people argue that it is necessary for children to learn academic subjects at secondary school. For those who tend to earn a degree from university, having an appropriate background knowledge in academic subjects are required. Physics, for instance, is one of the core subjects that should be taught to everyone at high-school if they want to take a degree in engineering majors like mechanical engineering, civil engineering, and so on. Moreover, there are some other subjects which pupils should learn as a personal knowledge at school like history which offers them a wide perspective view about what happened in the past to the nations, governments and cultures.
However, beside the ideas mentioned above, others have different points of view. They believe that academic subjects can be taught to one who want continue their studies, at universities rather than schools. As most children take a gap year after ending up their high-school, practical skills like mechanical and gardening can be much more imperative for them. Furthermore, practical knowledge can bring them a lot of job opportunities in future, since some professions like gardening and landscaping need more practical skills than theoretical knowledge.
To sum up, in my opinion both academic subjects and practical skills should be taught to children with a reasonable balance, because they need both of them for a successful future.
- Some people want academic subjects such as history and physics to be taught at secondary school. Others want practical skills such as mechanical and gardening to be taught. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 67
- Some countries encourage teenagers to have part-time job and see it as a good thing, while others disagree. Give your opinion and explain both views. 73
- Some people want academic subjects such as history and physics to be taught at secondary school Others want practical skills such as mechanical and gardening to be taught Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
...the high-school curriculum. This raises the question of whether academic subjects including history and...
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Line 3, column 512, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'personal knowledge'.
Suggestion: personal knowledge
...r subjects which pupils should learn as a personal knowledge at school like history which offers the...
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Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...n bring them a lot of job opportunities in future, since some professions like gardening ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39194139194 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89877159027 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542124542125 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5857142286 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.666666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389243270323 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148404417495 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749449365471 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253107911988 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224467288084 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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