Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisation.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In the hectic life, where we work and how long we work in there is really a familiar question. Personally, choose to be a worker for a company all our working life or choose different campanies for different stage of working life are all really essential question to answer for ourselves, because it might lead us to the top of succes or to be a rank and file forever.
When it comes to work for different organizations, I think it will bring to us lots of chances to know who we really are, what our weakness and strength are,…Every agency has their own good sides for us to apply for, for instance, the giant companies such as Facebook or Amazon will surely provide us with their high salary and welfare. On the other hand, the start-up agencies with a smaller scale will give us the feelings of being respectful and believed, which is the top of MASLOW Tower. Therefore, we will experience many working positions with diverse feelings if we make a decision to work for various organisations during our time of working.
Turning to the other, should we just devote our working life for only one company, it will be another opportunity for us to make our occupation much better. The longer you go together with the company, the sooner you will be acknowledged and take off. I strongly feel that all leaders have their own assessment on their staffs, just running our tasks well, we will surely have a better salary or promotion. In addition, if we choose only one organisation to work in a long time, we can further our working skills and know more exactly what our seniors want, which we cannot get if choosing to work for many ones.
In my view, I can see that each of views has its own good and bad sides, but I think working for one organisation all working time will give us more opportunities than the other, because “Every Jack has his Jill”, if we devote much enough for an agency, they will treat us as well as we do. In conclusion, both views are all good, every of views gives us every different experience and chances; therefore, set your goal at first, then choose one of them is the best way to save up time and be home and dry!
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| 2021-09-10 | nta.1803 | 67 | view |
| 2020-07-21 | MAHIR VHORA | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4834605598 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49157103873 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508905852417 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.9183989938 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.181818182 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.7272727273 20.7667163134 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8181818182 7.06120827912 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380596855863 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162734853314 0.084324248473 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866313794711 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266630154758 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272817684284 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.3 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.