Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisation.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Industries are growing day by day and provides attractive jobs in different sectors. Many people prefer to stay with one company for their entire life and devote their skills and efforts to it. While some individual believe that it is a good idea to work in different companies rather than stick to one. In this essay I will examine both parts of the essay before the reason conclusion is reached.
On one part of the essay, there are people who give their loyalty to one industry and get emotionaly attached to it. This kind of practice may bring myriad of benefits but there are drawbacks. To illustrate in more specific way, devotes his loylity to a company to whom he was extremely attached with, the company got bankrupt and his father had to face redundancy in the middle of his age. For this reason, he could not find a job because of his lack of outdated skills in nowadays words. He did not upgrade is information and skills and now has to face unemployment.
On the other hand, some people make an opposing case. Their perspective is, a person should work in different industries. There concern to this might be is, by implementing this, people would gain various skills and keep to update themselves for many situations. A good example here is in Dubai, many youngsters like to move from one company to after 2,3 years of practice. By doing this, their Curriculum Vitiate (CV) upgrades, atmosphere changes, meet new people, stress less life and gain more friends.
In conclusion, I believe that both points have their own merits but I tend to believe changing jobs and practicing with various of companies is more considerable factor where many people would be agree with me.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... devote their skills and efforts to it. While some individual believe that it is a go...
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Line 3, column 472, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
... because of his lack of outdated skills in nowadays words. He did not upgrade is informatio...
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Line 4, column 216, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'keep updating'.
Suggestion: keep updating
...s, people would gain various skills and keep to update themselves for many situations. A good ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e many people would be agree with me.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, while, as to, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76870748299 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54157890004 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585034013605 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6674999919 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183621757283 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620139518601 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057802955807 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113791354872 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577092494798 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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