Some people work for the same organisation all their working life.Others think that it is better to work for different organisations.Discuss both these views and giv your own opinion.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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... for a company during their working life,while others assume that otherwise.Both ideas...
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Suggestion: Both
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... different companies is better for them.It is generally believe that working in va...
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...nies is better for them.It is generally believe that working in various organizations r...
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... well as creating new job opportunities.They believe that these are good and useful ...
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...s well as lifestyles. In conclusion,even though many pupils subscribe to the vie...
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...nt corporations could be better for them,i argue that it would make them disorder ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 195.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45128205128 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.60055514749 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584615384615 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.29825454 49.4020404114 233% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 265.75 106.682146367 249% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.75 20.7667163134 235% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.75 7.06120827912 308% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402512043401 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.254516291885 0.084324248473 302% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490681222839 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254516291885 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490681222839 0.056905535591 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.6 13.0946893788 218% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.3 50.2224549098 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.22 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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