some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think it it better to work for different organisations.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
With most time of their life being spejt in the workplaces people nowadays tend to attach more importance to job experience.In some people's view,it is of greater benefits to remain in one organisation for work while others are longing for different job experiences in changeable places.
Generally,staying in one comapany or other kind of organisation for a long time means a steady job which leads to promotions ajd rise in salaries.In addition,being familiar with their work and collegues people can establish a rapport with those around them thus forming a sense of community.But on the other hand other believe that switching profession a frequent basis its own appeals.to begin with it can prevent people from being vexed by working wearinsess.constantly doing different kinds of work those job happers can always keep the excitement and freshness when first take up something.Moreover shifting jobs offers people a chance to get acquainted with a number of diversified co-workers.They can also enrich their own knowledge bt finding about how other companies are operated and managed.Although both opinions should be be given their own credits personally,I would suggest that people keep their jobs steady without ceaseless change.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, thus, while, in addition, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 192.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44791666667 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38135974868 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.677083333333 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 96.0 20.2975951904 473% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 331.0 49.4020404114 670% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 523.0 106.682146367 490% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 96.0 20.7667163134 462% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 51.5 7.06120827912 729% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314230716211 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.274983831833 0.084324248473 326% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336690788254 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274983831833 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336690788254 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 52.2 13.0946893788 399% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -25.96 50.2224549098 -52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 40.7 11.3001002004 360% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.51 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.0 8.58950901804 151% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 40.4 10.1190380762 399% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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