some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In recent years, finding and applying for a job is being difficult situation. Whereas some people change their job to get better one, others have preference to proceed their stable job. There are arguments on both sides and I will outline them now.
it is by no means clear that citizens are always in search for appropriate job to release their financial problems. To lead a better life requires better working organization with well-paid job. Furthermore, minority of people adopted particular atmosphere and acquired enough experience, tend to decide to futher their working lifespan in different organizations with an eye to gain new skills. Besides this, people who enjoy working in various nations tend to discover new cities and countries. By doing this, not only they carry on their work abroad but also they make indigenous friends with population and become familiar with other cultures.
Conversely, majority of dwellers in the world set their heart on working in the same occupation. it might be said that workers in the same workplace for a long time get promoted with their persistence and better qualities in job. Moreover, people working and living in one particular area don’t have a tendency to alter their working condition. this is because they get used to working with the same workmates and daily tasks. it is scientifically true that more than 65% people rarely want to change their work with another one due to being accostomed to doing their job with familiar atmosphere.
To sum up, even though seeing higher opportunities to go on the job in different organizations, it may appear advisable to work and enhance working capacity in one area
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, conversely, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, whereas, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10507246377 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72959337708 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590579710145 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5260828377 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.642857143 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358286372245 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128888969216 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504279183075 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214579859082 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547293636862 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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