Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Other think that it's better to work for different organizations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Working in a company has been always controversial issue. Some people want to have a position in only a Organization for good, While others feel that they had better work in distinctive companies. There are valid notions on both sides which I will consider in this essay.
On the one hand, some assume that they find some difficulties making friends or setting a relationship with their new collegues. this is the reason why some staff are unwilling to alter their organizations. Sometimes they have been addicted to them. My friend John, for instance, have a soft spot for his co-workers and refused to work in UNO and because of his good relationship with staff of him. In addition, doing the same job for entire working life makes worker professional. it occurs naturally in the end. you won't have any difficulties when you are at work.
On the other hand, one major benefit of it is personal life experience. One may have a great life changing experience. More essentially, he or she communicates with a lot of people or observes their behavior or ways how they work. They all lead you personal improvement. Futhurmore, you will have chance to broaden Horizons by being in charge of different organizations. Finally it's possible to travel while you are working. If you work in somewhere as Embassy, it will exactly happen. you will have chance to travel in order to do job of yours even.
In conclusion, I make an assumption that it's impossible for me to deny that changing work has beneficial sides because its sides outweights the sides of working in the same company for entire working life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, may, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80434782609 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80718315268 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561594202899 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2768925434 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.7894736842 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5263157895 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63157894737 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344245504061 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919314957401 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800417928088 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221331006135 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476784870052 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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