In some places, old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In certain nations, elderly people receive more respect compared to youngsters, while the opposite is true in other countries. while some things are more valuable could regard others, the writers believe that young people need more investments than old people.
No one can deny the contribution of older people. The old generation has enormous health and time for human civilization. they also pioneered the exploration of new things in science, agriculture, geography, and other domains. Moreover, Their valuable experience will be a helping hand for future youth generations.
However, youth is the generation that will contribute to developing countries in the future. people at a young age have the energy, passion, and motivation not only to improve their families' living standards but also to establish a developed society. As a result, youngsters can build their careers by helping the elderly, and then they have the ability to take care of older people such as their parents or grandparents. Because of that, governments should pay attention to suitable investments for the young generation. For example, more education and support should be given to young people. Besides, gratitude is also needed for youth.
All in all, both elderly people and youth have made enormous contributions to countries, but youngsters should have invested more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, moreover, so, then, while, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42654028436 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8385737536 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616113744076 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5261644423 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0769230769 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2307692308 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13866874393 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483807517106 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042996884647 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932096473636 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496597127832 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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