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Some ports are extremely dangerous.why do you think people are still doing them?how can the risk be minimised.
People play sport for different reasons either for the fun of it or for competition. If it is for the fun of it then it can be away of relaxing one's mind from different things and if it is for competition,it could be for money, fame and satisfaction as well.
There are different types of sport,indoor games or outdoor games, but for the extremely dangerous ones like car racing, American football, horse racing and the likes. I belief they are been played for money and fame.
Money can buy most things in life,wanting to live a good life and for guys girls tends to flock around them and also ...
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I belief they are been played for money and fame.
I believe they are being played for money and fame.
it command respect.
it commands respect.
I belief drastic measures can be taken
I believe drastic measures can be taken
Sentence: Thou these sports are extremely dangerous which may lead to permanent disability or loss of life.
Description: A noun, singular, proper is not usually followed by a determiner/pronoun, plural
Suggestion: Refer to Thou and these
Sentence: People should be well enlightened either through TV,radio or newspaper before jumping into any kind of sport by so doing and with these measures I feel it will definitely minimise the risk of such sport.
Error: minimise Suggestion: minimize
flaws:
No. of Words: 240 350
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 240 350
No. of Characters: 1074 1500
No. of Different Words: 138 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.936 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.475 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.349 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 64 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 45 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 30 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.818 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.389 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.636 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.351 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.684 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.126 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5