Some say all offenders should be sent to prison, other argue that there are better alternatives such as community work for those who commit minor crimes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
At present, some people believe that the government should let offenders send to prison, while others argue that people who commit minor crimes should be applied in community work. From my point of view, i would side with the latter statement.
On the one hand, dangerous offenders should be sent to prison.To tackcle crimes, longer prison sentences would act as a deterrent and would be one useful measure.The reason why is people will have to think twice before commiting offenses. This strict punishment should be imposed in serious criminals. For example, those who drive while intoxicated must serve a prison sentence because they endanger innocent lives.
However, there are alternative punishment for people who violate minor laws.Firstly, the state should apply a range of non-custodial sentences such as heavy fines and the confiscation of driving licences if motorists break the traffic law. It has made them aware of the need to adhere to limit speed when driving.Secondly, community work has succeeded in not only helping offenders reflect their actions but provide them with favourable environment to devote to their society. Collecting trash and garbage in 24/7, for example, is a soft sentence that make people to learn how to protect the environment.Another compelling measure is giving a hand with the elder and the handicaped which raises their awareness about sharing , especially for young people.
In conclusion, in order to deal with criminals, some cases should be sent to prison while some cases who offends a minor crime might do community work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26693227092 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84769159894 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653386454183 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.2350167428 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.888888889 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8888888889 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8888888889 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353320479264 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132777755525 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935031314918 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222909750976 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621950779771 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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