Some say that it is more important for employers to consider academic qualifications rather than personal life experience and values when hiring an employee. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that hiring workers with education degree is more needed to take into account for employers rather than those with actual experience or good manners. Personally, I believe that both qualities can be valuable and should be determined equally. I therefore disagree with the assertion that academic qualifications are more crucial than life experience in recruitment.
On the one hand, good qualifications show that graduates are equipped with in-depth knowledge and helpful skills which are extremely necessary for their future jobs. Consequently, they would make a huge contribution to the company. In addition, education degree can be a persuasive evidence to prove workers’ perseverance and hard-working quality. To graduate a course, they must have been through heaps of hardships.
With respect to real-life experience and good personal traits, they likewise bring benefits to the company. Life experience helps provide people with multi-skilled and adaptability. They are able to deal with difficult situations more effectively, which helps improve work productivity. Moreover, experience also teach them how to behave well with good manners.
In conclusion, both employees with excellent qualifications or experience and good traits would contribute to the company’s value, and recruiters therefore should weigh them up equally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: ACTUAL_EXPERIENCE[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...nt for employers rather than those with actual experience or good manners. Personally, I believe ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, likewise, moreover, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1164.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.84924623116 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12128671331 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628140703518 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1672717797 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5833333333 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188456481015 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699343107033 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831197196906 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114551086166 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849530931371 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.35 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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