It is proposed that online working frm home should be encouraged for employees, having no need to travel to offices. As far as I am concerned, benefits such as saving costs of transportation as well as increased productivity far prevail over insignificant drawbacks.
Online work seems to have two main benefits. First employees usually spend plenty of their time commuting to work traffic congestions during rush hours caused by the traditional way of working. This time can be replaced by increased exchange of ideas between employees via Zoom if they work online from home. Thus a burden on transport systems can be eased and the costs of transportation are saved. Second, as employees have flexible working hours if they work online, their productivity can also increase. Consequently, companies can gain more profit than they used to, resulting in better salaries of employees. In the long term, this trend can cause greater level of job satisfaction.
However, some minor drawbacks can make this trend slightly unattractive. One of the problems associated with remote working is taht employees can lose face-to-face contact with each other. They can become a bit isolated if they work only remotely. This can make it rather difficult to get feedback from each other. Another problem might be that most employees live with their families. As a result, they can be disturbed by their child or wife during online conferences or meetings. This can make them feel less comfortable when they are discussing future prospects with their employers.
All in all, I feel that online working gives people opportunities to work flexibly without the need of commuting and boosts their productivity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...via Zoom if they work online from home. Thus a burden on transport systems can be ea...
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Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be eased and the costs of transportation are saved. Second, as employees have fle...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, second, so, thus, well, i feel, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23443223443 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9051521986 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5230073754 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0588235294 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0588235294 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187774545755 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656585500786 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586374260767 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116931441542 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373901485931 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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