Some say that the most important thing about being rich is that one has the opportunity to help others.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that helping others is one of the most essential issues in human life. In my opinion, helping others is a significant important for a rich person. In this essay, I will disscuss aggrements and disaggrements about this subject.
It is obvios that some people have a supreior finance situations than others. I aggree with the people who believe that helping others is a positive behaviour such that it gives them a self-loving feeling when they give some helps to others who are poors. For instance, consider someone who can not afford to buy a computer, if you think you have sufficient money hence, you lend them some financial aid. Certainly, after doing that you will be proud of yourself because of being positively effective on that person's life.
However, helping poor people can be considered as a humanity value, it may bother them also. For example, if someone helps other with a top-down or a master-slave view, surely it can bother them. From my point of view, such a helping is one of the most negative and bothering behaviours that a person can perform.
In conclusion, helping other people can be considered a high value regarding the humanity and morality, even though it may bother people, if it is done in a wrong manner. Therefore the intent and quality of helping others is significantly important either, as I think.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 241, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...ing when they give some helps to others who are poors. For instance, consider someone w...
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Line 2, column 509, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...e of being positively effective on that persons life. However, helping poor people can...
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Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...as a humanity value, it may bother them also. For example, if someone helps other wi...
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Line 4, column 153, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a wrong manner" with adverb for "wrong"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ugh it may bother people, if it is done in a wrong manner. Therefore the intent and quality of he...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...eople, if it is done in a wrong manner. Therefore the intent and quality of helping other...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85775862069 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67632847317 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560344827586 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0550004486 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9166666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281326619817 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109646570269 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534669304486 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177512446264 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521819125823 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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