While the substantial influence of music lessons on the kids has sparked a lot of debates and discussions, I personally believe that music as a subject should be given equal importance as other subjects, especially at the pre-school level.
To begin with, its well-acclaimed therapeutic value, music plays a very consequential role in the learning experience for the baby minds. For instance, rhymes and poetries are memorized much easily if sung in a tune. Children learn how to divide, create fractions, and recognize patterns by understanding beat, rhythm, and scales from different musical instruments. Strumming the strings of a guitar or violin teaches the children about basic physics like harmonic and sympathetic vibrations.
To further emphasize my stance, I would like to bring attention to the fact that music helps cultivate social skill and refine discipline through peer collaboration. For example, when students are assigned to work in an ensemble, they are required to coordinate with each other, understand their role in the project and then play their individual part to create the perfect melody.
Moreover, music, with its well-acclaimed therapeutic value, lets the pupils relax and rejuvenate. It not only keeps them engaged and makes attending school an attractive activity, but also plays a pivotal element in stimulating creativity among the young minds. Not to mention, music can also pave a career path at a later stage for those who would master its art.
To recapitulate, the abovementioned musical merits provide several plausible arguments of why introducing music classes in pre-school would prove beneficiary for the students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54148471616 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07906404297 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.729257641921 0.561755894193 130% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9195357425 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.363636364 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140493590756 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457165673289 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609210105037 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813690722009 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721765807498 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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