It is considered by some people that skyscrapers' occupants feel alone and they are not cheerful, while others think that there are a lot of plus points with regard to living in multi-storey buildings. I agree with the latter group on the basis of some compelling reasons.
On the one hand, some people hold the view that living in high-rise constructions makes people depressed and isolated. Firstly, skyscrapers usually consist of an array of apartment units where a great number of families are living. This leads to anonymity and therefore people do not know their neighbors even their immediate ones. As a consequence, if they need urgent help, there is no one to assist them. Furthermore, multi-storey apartment blocks may lack green areas such as park, garden and so forth. Hence, there is no place for their residents to breathe a fresh air or enjoy the song of birds. Apart from this, locating in city centre, skyscrapers are exposed to bumper-to- bumper traffic in their vicinity, and consequently their dwellers suffer from air and noise pollution.
On the other hand, the opposing view assert that high-rise buildings provide their residents with high-end facilities and security. To begin with, take gym and swimming pool of these buildings as an example; they eliminate the need of commuting to sports centers. This is an obvious benefit for today's people who are living a hectic lifestyle. Moreover, there are guards and video surveillance monitoring entrance which reduce the chance of burglary and render people safe at their homes.
In conclusion, there are some rational arguments on both sides of the controversy; however, it is my firm conviction that residing in modern apartment blocks brings various advantages such as security and convenience that any individual can enjoy.
- Many museums charge for admission while others are free.Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 56
- Some people from poor and rural backgrounds find it difficult to get a university education. Universities have to make it easier, especially for such groups, to get into them.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- Should young people follow older people’s example or it’s good for them to challenge older people’s opinions and thoughts. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 73
- More and more people want to own famous brands of cars, clothes and other items. What are the reasons for this? Is this a negative or positive trend? 89
- Nowadays more and more business meetings and business training are taking place online. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17465753425 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74527477492 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619863013699 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4876298705 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.928571429 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5714285714 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199903483144 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634600228824 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800252107232 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11159552967 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021960046782 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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