Physical health is an utmost important factor for building a healthier society. However, there are predominantly two contrasting views where a section of society advocates that sports have gained the popularity while others emphasize that it is just a leisure activity. In this essay, I will discuss both views in detail along with my opinion.
Apparently, various factors make a section of people advocate that playing sports is a vital role in our society. First and foremost is the fact that individuals will eventually become physically fit and healthy while regularly playing or exercising for a few hours in their daily lives. Subsequently. It will reduce the severe effects on our body such as heart disease problems for older ages, obesity problems, especially in younger ages. For example, a recent survey from the BBC shows that 23% percent of the younglings population in America have been influenced with the obesity problems because of not participating in exercising activities such as Aerobics, Yoga, Gym and playing outdoor games. Therefore, it is essential for every human on Earth to stay fit and healthy which only can be done by involving in sports activities.
On the other hand, some believe that playing sports is just a leisure activity for particularly one reason. Chiefly, it is true that not everyone has the ability to become a professional sportsperson in their lives. Consequently, people have considered this activity to enjoy in their free time. This will relax their mind and remove stress from their bodies.
However, in my opinion, parents should encourage their children to play outdoor sports since with the advancements of technology many youngsters are focused on playing computer games instead of outdoor sports. This can lead to rising health problems in their lives such as obesity.
In conclusion, although some people believe that sports activity is to enjoy in a free time, I still think that it plays a significant role in the society because of bringing the benefits to people in terms of health and social areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, consequently, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05357142857 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66693238472 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529761904762 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 336.0 20.2975951904 1655% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1698.0 106.682146367 1592% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 336.0 20.7667163134 1618% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 156.0 7.06120827912 2209% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25213602205 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.25213602205 0.084324248473 299% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152516785905 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736816981112 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 170.4 13.0946893788 1301% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -269.56 50.2224549098 -537% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 134.3 11.3001002004 1188% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.49 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.16 8.58950901804 281% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 61.0 9.78957915832 623% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 136.4 10.1190380762 1348% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 61.0 10.7795591182 566% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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